Monday, March 24, 2014

Week 9: A: Full Class Critique

Today was the full class critique for the Logo Opener. In my case, I had done my opener based around the SCP Foundation. As I had explained in my last post, it is a security unit designed to protect humanity from extra -terrestrial, -dimensional, and -universal threats. I got good feed back on the final product.

  • The transitions and sound effects worked well
  • I could have used a different typeface due to legibility issues
  • The typeface also makes the image look a little left-heavy
  • An extra second of rest would have worked in favor for the legibility of the opener
Something that I had forgot to mention in my posts that was questioned in the critique was about the background. I had intentionally left it black and white to imitate a government service alert or announcement. Usually government service announcements are displayed as stark with only two colors (including white as one color).
I am also surprised that no one pointed out any issues with the sound effects. To me, I thought the metal noise could come in later.

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